? ? ? ? 小天同學學校的英語課每周會有一次寫作練習，老師給一個主題，然后學生自由寫作，老師批改的時候不會指出任何語法或者單詞錯誤，只針對內容做一個回應，一般都是表揚的句子。他們貌似更看重表達出自己的觀點，至于細節錯誤則交給時間去處理。小天同學局限于詞匯量儲備不夠，英語母語的同學能寫一頁A4紙，她現在只能寫半頁。
? ? ? 在國內只上過網絡課，沒上過實體的英語培訓班，為了更快地跟上班級課程進度，小天同學在這里的培訓機構報了一對一的課程，主要內容是口語和寫作。老師很認真，擅長和孩子聊天，給小天同學講了寫一般夾敘夾議文章的套路：提出觀點，列舉三個輔助觀點的內容，然后分別展開增加細節，最后來個總結。
? ? ? 以下是小天同學依據套路寫出的作文，我沒有學校老師的定力，忍不住要她改正拼寫和語法錯誤，然后讓她自己輸入Word，再通過Word檢查一下有沒有大的問題。以下是經過修改的作文內容，表達了她最喜歡的季節是秋天。
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? My Favourite Season
? ? In autumn, the kids go to school again. Some fruits are ready to be picked. My favourite season is autumn, because the leaves change colours, the weather is cool and we have the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I pretty enjoy autumn. It is the best season.
? ? I like autumn best because the leaves change colours. When the leaves change into red, yellow and orange, oh and burgundy, they are very beautiful. When the leaves fall down, it looks like butterfly flying in the sky. And the most amazing part is I can make art with the leaves.
? ? I like autumn because the weather is cool. I mean, the sun is still shiny, but the weather is not like summer, too hot, not like winter, too cold that you just want to stay at your warm little bed. It’s just very comfortable. I can go hiking, or have a picnic with my family in a park.
? ? I like autumn because we have the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. That means no school for a day, and I can go see my grandma, I very miss her. The most interesting part is, my mom and I always make mooncakes at home, they are very delicious, you should try one.
? ? ? That's the three reasons that I think autumn is the best season. Do you like autumn?
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