譯/鯉氏
I like for you to be still
我愛你寂靜之時
It is as though you are absent
恍若你遠(yuǎn)離塵世
And you hear me from far away
你于遠(yuǎn)處聆聽
And my voice does not touch you
我之聲色難及
It seems as though your eyes had flown away
似雙眼乘翅游離
And it seems that a kiss had sealed your mouth
似雙唇以吻封閉
As all things are filled with my soul
然無處不在
You emerge from the things
然無跡可尋
Filled with my soul
直抵我心，直抵我心
You are like my soul
似魂靈交融
A butterfly of dream
似蝴蝶入夢
And you are like the word: Melancholy
擾我愁思，擾我愁思
I like for you to be still
我愛你寂靜之時
And you seem far away
恍若你遠(yuǎn)離塵世
It sounds as though you are lamenting
似鴿之悲嘆
A butterfly cooing like a dove
似蝶之呢喃
And you hear me from far away
你于遠(yuǎn)處聆聽
And my voice does not reach you
我卻聲色難及
Let me come to be still in your silence
許，“以汝之靜默靜默”
And let me talk to you with your silence
許，“以汝之靜默傾心”
That is bright as a lamp
此光至明
Simple, as a ring
此誓至清
You are like the night
恰如長夜降臨
With its stillness and constellations
靜謐與繁星交映
Your silence is that of a star
于黑暗處閃耀
As remote and candid
于遙遠(yuǎn)處明凈
I like for you to be still
我愛你寂靜之時
It is as though you are absent
恍若你遠(yuǎn)離塵世
Distant and full of sorrow
遺世而獨立
So you would've died
似你肉身隕滅
One word then,
一言，
One smile is enough And I'm happy;
一笑，足以歡喜
Happy that it's not true
因我愛你，僅此而已
手記：“蒹葭蒼蒼，白露為霜。所謂伊人，在水一方。溯洄從之，道阻且長。溯游從之，宛在水中央。”
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