NCE-2 49 The end of a dream

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Lesson 49 The end of a dream 美夢告終

Tired of sleeping on the floor, a young man in Teheran saved up for years to buy a real bed. For the first time in his life, he became the proud owner of a bed which had springs and a mattress. Because the weather was very hot, he carried the bed on to the roof of his house. He slept very well for the first two nights, but on the third night, a storm blew up. A gust of wind swept the bed off the roof and sent it crashing into the courtyard below. The young man did not wake up until the bed had struck the ground. Although the bed was smashed to pieces, the man was miraculously unhurt. When he woke up, he was still on the mattress. Glancing at the bits of wood and metal that lay around him, the man sadly picked up the mattress and carried it into his house. After he had put it on the floor, he promptly went to sleep again.

德黑蘭的一個人年輕人由于對睡地板感到厭倦,于是積蓄多年買了一張真正的床。他平生第一次自豪地擁有了一張既有彈簧又帶床墊的床。由于天氣很熱,他便把床搬到了他的屋頂上。頭兩天晚上,他睡得非常好。但第三天晚上起了風暴。一陣大風把床從屋頂上刮了下來,把它摔碎在下面的院子里。那年輕人直到床撞到地上才醒了過來。盡管床摔成了碎片,但年輕人卻奇跡地沒有受傷。他醒來時,仍然躺在床墊上。年輕人看了一眼周圍的碎木片和碎金屬片,傷心地撿起了床墊,把它拿進了屋。他把床墊往地板上一放,很快又睡著了。

  • tired
    • v. tire; driving tires sb; he tires of driving; sth tire sb out
    • a. tired 累的, 困倦的, 厭煩的
    • n. tiredness
  • save up = save
    • save up enough money to go travelling
      - > save up for a new camera

  • for 用于表達"首次/最后一次"的短語
    • for the first time / for the last day
    • He was married for the second time, this time is a Germany.

  • spring
    1. bent metal that can be pressed into a small space but then returns to its usual shape
    2. ability to return its usual shape afterit has been pressed
  • mattress: flat object which is put on a bed to make it comfortable to sleep on
  • a gust of: a short, strong and sudden rush of wind
  • sweep, swept: to move, especially quickly and powerfully
    • sb/stb be swept somewhere, you are taken there very quickly
  • send sth doing 使做, 使發(fā)生
    • a gust of wind sent papers flying all over the room.
  • courtyard 天井, 或庭院, 一定是露天的
  • wake up = wake
  • smash: ~ sth or sth ~, it breaks into many pieces
    • A glass fell off and smashed into pieces.
  • miraculous a. 奇跡般的
    • They miraculously survived the plane crash.
  • glance at: look at them very quickly and then look away again immediately
    • He glanced at his watch.
  • bit: small part, section or piece of sth
    • There were bits of paper on the floor.
    • Would you like a bit of chocolate.
  • pick up 撿起, 舉起 lift sth up
  • promptly UK ['pr?mpt.li] US ['prɑ:mpt-] = immediately
    • She promised she'd keep secret and promptly went and told Lily.
    • a. prompt 迅速的, 立即的, 及時的
      • prompt action / treatment / payment / response
      • we'll leave at 6 o'clock prompt. 六點準時
  • tired of sleeping ... 過去分詞作狀語
    • 動作是主語動作的一部分, 同時或先于謂語動作發(fā)生
    • 句首 when/if,whether/because,as,since/though,if
    • Seen from the top of hill(city be seen), the city looks more beatiful.
      Given another chance, he will do better.
      Tired of sleeping on the floor, he bought a real bed.
      Tired, the worker went on working.
      - 句首或句尾 作方式或伴隨狀態(tài), 不可變從句
      - > Surrounded by fans, the actor sat there cheerfully.
      > The old man walked down, supported by his son.
      - 為了強調(diào), 可帶when,while,if,unless,until等
      - > If given more time, they would have done it better.

  • glancing at ... 現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語
    • 作時間狀語
    • Hearing the news, they all jumped with joy.
      Having read the letter, she got very angry.
      - 方式狀語
      - > He earns a living by driving.
      > They would be able to reply to our signals by using similar methods.
      - 作目的狀語
      > Six blind men stood there begging for a meal.(in order to beg)
      - 作結果狀語
      - > Her husband died in 1942, leaving her with 3 children to look after.
      - > She threw the cup on the ground, breaking it into pieces.
      - 作伴隨狀語
      - > She stood leaning against the wall.
      > The children ran out of the room, laughing and talking merrily.
      - 作原因狀語
      - > Being sick, I stayed at home.
      > Not knowing his email and address, I can't contact her.
      - 作條件狀語
      - 作讓步狀語
      - > Working so hard, he failed again.
      > Living miles away, he attended to course.
      - 起補充說明作用
      - > Working hard, you will succeed.
      - 作獨立成分特殊作用
      - > generally speaking, ...
      > exactly speaking, ...
      > judging from/by sth,
      > considering sth, ...

  • 現(xiàn)在分詞與過去分詞作狀語的區(qū)別
    • 動詞和主語是主動還是被動關系
    • He went out shutting the door behind him.
      Not knowing what to do, he went to his parents for help.

From The young man's View:

Tired of sleeping on the floor, I saved up many years to buy a real bed. I was very pround to be the owner of the bed which had springs and a mattress. It was super comfortable to sleep on it. As the weather was terribly hot, I carried the bed on the roof of my house. I slept well for the first two night, but on the third night, a storm blew up. My bed was swept off the roof by a gust of wind, crashing into courtyard below. I did not woke up until the mattress struck on the ground. When I woke up, I felt upset to notice that my mattress was smashed into pieces. But I still was sleepy. Glancing at the bits of wood and metal, I picked up the mattress and carried it into my house. After putting it on the floor and lying on it, I promptly fell asleep.

Knowledges

感覺沒啥總結的, 都在今天的知識點內(nèi)

From THe young man's mother's View:

Tired of sleeping on the floor, my poor son saved up for years to buy a bed which had springs and a mattress. After trying to sleeping on it, I felt it was more comfortable to sleep on it than to sleep on floor. It was too hot to sleep on the mattress in bedroom, so my son carried it on the roof of his house. He slept well for the first two nights, but on the third night, a storm blew up. A gust of wind swept the bed off the roof and sent it crashing into courtyard below. Sleeping deeply, my son did not wake until the bed struck on the ground. Although the bed was smashed into pieces, but my son was miraculously unhurt. When he woke up, he was still on the mattress. Glancing at the bits of wood and metal, he picked up the mattress and carried it into his house. After he had put it on the floor, he went to sleep again.

Knowledges

除了前兩句, 后面不知道怎么改寫.

  • than
    • You should know better than to behave like that.

  • 復寫下來, 詞的用法基本正確

Remembers

  • send sth doing 使做, 使發(fā)生
    • a gust of wind sent papers flying all over the room.
  • 現(xiàn)在/過去 分詞做狀語的種種用法
  • 現(xiàn)在分詞與過去分詞作狀語的區(qū)別
    • 動詞和主語是主動還是被動關系
    • He went out shutting the door behind him.
      Not knowing what to do, he went to his parents for help.

(作文時間: 2017-01-31, 耗時: 150 分鐘)

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