1??As the society is developing at a fast pace, people are under pressure and suffering from physical affection in their busy life. 2??As a consequence, many citizens stand up against to the crazy pace of life and appeal to people to live in a relaxed manner, which is good for people's physical and mental health. 3??However, those against slowing down the pace of life believe that the fast rhythm of life can improve work efficiency, prolong leisure time and expand social circle.
4??Personally speaking, I hold the view that people can make decisions by themselves according to their own conditions since either fast or relaxed lifestyle has both merits and demerits. 5??For one thing, for those who are trying hard to climbing to the top of the social ladder, they need to keep improving their competitiveness and every minute is too valuable for them to be wasted. 6??For another, the dream-job seekers who are exhausted by the frenetic pace of life may want to retreat to a quieter and slower corner of the world. 7??Then they can have time to enjoy nature, food and communication with people around them. 8??So choose your lifestyle wisely and you can certain find happiness in your choice.
【解析】
第一段從現(xiàn)象層面分析了兩種不同的生活態(tài)度，第二段從個人層面說明不同人有不同的選擇。
【煉句】
1??As the society is developing at a fast pace,people are under pressure and suffering from physical affection in their busy life.
這一句比較萬能，可用到很多社會問題的開頭。
2??As a consequence, many citizens stand up against to?the crazy pace of life and appeal to people?to live in a relaxed manner, which is good for people's physical and mental health.
承接上一句，問題出現(xiàn)了，結(jié)果是什么呢？As a consequence。。。
另外，上一句用的是people，這里改用了citizens作為同義替換。
表示“反對”怎么表達呢，stand up against。
“過閑適的生活”--live in a relaxed manner
3??However, those against?slowing down the pace of life?believe that the?fast rhythm of life?can improve work efficiency, prolong leisure time and expand social circle.
放緩生活節(jié)奏--slow down the pace of life
快節(jié)奏的生活--fast rhythm of life;frenetic pace of life
4??Personally speaking, I hold the view that?people can make decisions by themselves according to their own conditions since either fast or relaxed lifestyle?has both merits and demerits.
“我認為”的萬能表達--Personally speaking, I hold the view that。。（這句也挺萬能的~）
“既有優(yōu)點，也有缺點”--has both merits and demerits。
5??For one thing, for those who are trying hard to?climbing to the top of the social ladder, they need to keep improving their competitiveness and every minute is too valuable for them to be wasted.
“走向人生巔峰”--climb to the top of the social ladder
走上人生巔峰的條件是啥呢？--improve their competitiveness and value time(every minute is too valuable for them to be wasted)
6??For another, the dream-job seekers who are exhausted by the frenetic pace of life may want to?retreat to a quieter and slower corner of the world.
“感覺身體被苦逼的生活掏空”-- be exhausted by the frenetic pace of life
“回歸小確幸的生活”--retreat to a quieter and slower corner of the world
7??Then they can have time to enjoy nature, food and communication with people around them.
享受自然、美食和陪伴。
8??So choose your lifestyle wisely and you can certain find happiness in your choice.
這句有總結(jié)觀點的作用~
