《語法俱樂部》| 第十九章、第二十章:副詞從句簡化

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所有從句的簡化都是為了求精簡,省略主語是為了避免與之前的重復,省略be動詞是其本身無意義。副詞從句的簡化有五種不同的變化,我們分別講解。

一、簡化為Ving補語


如果副詞從句是進行時,省略主語與be動詞之后就是Ving形式,如果沒有be動詞和助動詞,就得先改成進行式再省略be動詞得到Ving形式:

① 連接詞是否保留

副詞從句的連接詞有一定的詞義功能,如while與before不同,雖然簡化了,但有時候也不能省略,只有當句子的意思足夠清楚的條件下才能夠將連接詞省略掉。

While lying on the couch, the boy fell asleep.

這一句中的while就可以省略,一般來說while(when)表示當……時,because、as、since表示因為,省略以后句子的意思依然完整,就可以省略。

② 沒有be動詞與助動詞

Because we have nothing to do here, we might as well go home.

普通動詞have,沒有be動詞可以省略,也沒有助動詞可以改寫就只有先變成be+Ving形式,這里不是進行時態,而是詞類的變化。

Having nothing to do here, we might as well go home.

注意:一般來說表示原因的連接詞because、since等都需要省略,如果加上會十分累贅。

③ 應該保留的連接詞

如果連接詞省略以后句子意思不清楚,就不能省略

Although we have nothing to do here, we can't leave early.

簡化成:

Although having nothing to do here, we can't leave early.

在這個句子中although表示一種轉折,不能省略。

同理:

He raised his hand, as if he was trying to hit her.

簡化成:

He raised his hand, as if trying to hit her.

as if 在這里表示好像,如果省略以后,讀者可能默認為因為要打她,句子的意思就會改變。

④ being的運用

be動詞一般在簡化時都需要省略,但有時候也不能省略的過頭了。

As I am a student, I can't afford to get married.

省略掉As I am以后,a student會被誤認為是主語或者同位語,不適宜全部省略。可改寫成:

As a student, I can't afford to get married.

Being a student, I can't afford to get married.

⑤ 連接詞before、after、since作介系詞

Before he was in school, he used to be a naughty child.

如果省略掉before he was就變成了:

In school, he used to be a naughty child.

沒有了連接詞before,就沒有從前在學校的意思了,但是如果單純的加上before in school,在語法上就有錯誤。before只能接名詞類。為了將in school改成名詞類,加入being即可:

Before being in school, he used to be a naughty child.

⑥ 時態問題

After he wrote the letter, he put it to mail.

簡化成:

After writing the letter, he put it to mail.

需要保留連接詞after,如果省略掉,就需要進行時態上的改變以保持句子原有的意思:

Having written the letter, he put it to mail.

⑦ 主語不同時

When the child was already sleeping soundly in bed, her mother came to kiss her goodnight.

從句的主語the child和主句的主語her mother是不同的,如果省略就變成了:

Already sleeping soundly in bed, her mother came to kiss her goodnight.

句子的意思表達不清楚,這時候就需要改變主語從句的結構,使得它與從句的主語一致:

Already sleeping soundly in bed, the child did not know it when her mother came to kiss her goodnight.

我們還可以保留兩個不同的主語,改寫成:

The child already sleeping soundly in bed, her mother came to kiss her goodnight.

注意事項:a、連接詞要省略,這里省略when;b、后面必須配合分詞補語(現在分詞、過去分詞)sleeping soundly,才能顯示省略了be動詞。

二、簡化為Ven補語


副詞從句如果原來是被動時態(be+Ven),簡化之后沒有了be動詞,就變成了Ven。

① 是否保留連接詞

Although he was shot in the knee, he killed three more enemy soldiers.

簡化以后不能省略掉連接詞although,因為although表達有“相反”的意思應該予以保留:

Although shot in the knee, he killed three more enemy soldires.

② before、after、since的特殊連接詞

Before it was redecorated, the house was in bad shape.

簡化為:

Before redecorated, the house was in bad shape.

副詞從句省略以后before不能省略,不然表達的意思就是裝修完成以后,和句子以前的意思不同。但是保留以后又會出現一個問題,就是before當介詞使用,后面要跟名詞類,我們加入being只是作為詞類的變化:

Before being redecorated, the house was in bad shape.

③ 如何處理having been

Because they had been warned, they proceeded carefully.

如果保留had been就改寫成:

Having been warned, they proceeded carefully.

如果省略掉hand been,就改寫成:

Warned, they proceeded carefully.

having been如果后面跟的是過去分詞,即使省略掉having been以后句子的意思仍然不變,也沒有語法上的錯誤。就可以省略掉。

④ 主語不同時

如果副詞從句與主句的主語不同,就得把主語保留下來

When the coffin had been interred, the minister said a few comforting words.

副詞從句的 主語是the coffin,主句的主語是the minister,并不相同。簡化時要同時保留:

The coffin interred, the minister said a few comforting words.

⑤ 助動詞改寫成to V形式

I'll only be too glad if I can help.

簡化成:I'll only be too glad to help.

⑥ 動詞只有be動詞時

只有當副詞從句的主語與主句的主語相同的時候才能將be動詞省略。

1> 介系詞短語

When you are under attack, you must take cover immediately.

簡化為:

When under attack, you must take over immediately.

2> 形容詞

While it is small in size, the company is very competitive.

副詞從句的補語是形容詞small,簡化的方式相同

While small in size, the company is very competitive.

3> 名詞

Although he was a doctor by training, Asimov became a writer.

簡化方式相同:

Although a doctor by training , Asimov became a writer.

總結:副詞從句的連接詞通常有意義,需要保留,所有后面的簡化沒有太大的變化。只是一些特殊的連接詞需要注意。

⑦ 改寫成介系詞短語

副詞從句改寫成介系詞短語,是大幅度的簡化。許多連接詞都要找到接近的介詞進行改寫,只剩下一個名詞空間來裝下整個從句的內容。

when——on\upon;because——with;although——despite\in spite of;if——in case of;等

1> if改成in case of:

If there should be a fire, the sprinkler will be started.

In case of a fire, the sprinkler will be started.

2> although改寫成despite

Although he opposed it, the plan was carried out.

Despite his opposition, the plan was carried out.

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