雅思如何兩個月考到6.5?作為藝術(shù)生的我有話說(附雅思成績復(fù)議經(jīng)驗)是我在簡書上發(fā)布的第一篇文章,原本只是單純的想將自己備考雅思的方法分享給大家,希望能夠稍微幫到那些英語底子不是那么好正在經(jīng)受或者將要經(jīng)受雅思“摧殘”的鴨友們。還記得當(dāng)初決定考雅思的時候,我也是個什么都不懂的小白,只能想盡辦法在網(wǎng)上搜各種經(jīng)驗貼,隨便點開一個都是首戰(zhàn)7或者二戰(zhàn)8.5,那些學(xué)神們的傳奇幾乎讓我自慚形穢,由于英語水平相差了好幾個數(shù)量級,所以他們的方法貌似在我這里也不太好使,我當(dāng)時就是不斷的試錯,走了許多彎路,也耽誤了許多復(fù)習(xí)的寶貴時間,當(dāng)時就想,我要是考過了,一定要寫一篇文章,名字就叫“學(xué)渣的雅思逆襲之路”,哈哈,說笑的哈。其實文章發(fā)布以來就受到那么多小伙伴們的喜愛是我始料未及的,在這里也謝謝大家,從你們給我發(fā)的簡信里我體會到了助人的快樂,這是一件有意義的事情,不是嗎?
剛剛說了不少廢話,現(xiàn)在言歸正題哈。許多小伙伴簡信我都提到了一個共同的問題,那就是雅思的口語和寫作到底應(yīng)該怎么提高,口語總是萬年5.5,寫作寫了那么多一點用都沒有......因為問這兩部分的小伙伴太多了,而且三兩句話也確實說不清楚,一個個回復(fù)效率太低了,思來想去還是根據(jù)這兩部分各寫一篇文章深入分析一下。今天我先分析一下口語吧,如果小伙伴們有問題是文章里沒說到的,可以隨后再簡信我,看到都會回復(fù)大家的。
說起口語,小伙伴們可能或多或少有些惶恐,我只想跟大家說不要害怕,要自信一點,即便你什么都不會說,在姿態(tài)和氣勢上也絕對不能讓老外看低了你。其實跟大多數(shù)小伙伴比起來我的英語口語并不好,甚至比大家還差,但是通過努力,掌握一些口語的技巧,事實證明拿到一個至少不會拖后腿的分?jǐn)?shù)還是沒有問題的,所以大家一定要有信心。由于口語考試的備考資料和方法,我在上一篇文章已經(jīng)講得很清楚了,這篇文章我主要是通過具體的例子來詳細(xì)說明口語考試中應(yīng)該注意的問題以及part1,part2,part3部分應(yīng)該怎么組織答案。
一、口語考試應(yīng)該注意的問題
1.要按照雅思考試工作人員的要求,手機,手表等電子設(shè)備千萬不要帶進考場,我第一次考試那天,就有一個學(xué)生因為來晚了,忘了把手機關(guān)機放包里,結(jié)果被考官發(fā)現(xiàn),具體怎么處置我不知道,但是據(jù)說后果很嚴(yán)重,大家不要以身試法,盡量提前去考場候考,省得慌里慌張。
2.進入考場之后考官說“good morning/afternoon",千萬別說錯了,我第一次考的時候過度緊張,本來是上午考,我說成了“good afternoon”,考官一臉蒙逼,我立刻說了“sorry”,然而印象分就木有了,所以千萬別緊張,一緊張很容易就刷新了你智商的下限。
3.一定要表現(xiàn)的禮貌自信,記住回答問題的時候要面帶微笑(笑容不要太刻意的,容易引起考官反感,還有不要笑得太過頭了,我第一次考雅思口語,臉都笑攤了),與考官要有眼神的交流,記住自然一點,在英美國家,與談話者保持眼神的交流是一種自信的表現(xiàn),其實在中國也是。
4.口語考場上不要有小動作,比如有些女生一緊張就會捏自己的手或者衣服,挪椅子之類的,口語考場上千萬別這樣,你以為你做這些動作很細(xì)微考官不會發(fā)現(xiàn)?還是那句話,老外精著呢。
5.回答問題的時候流暢度很重要而且是非常重要,不要um,um,um......扣分很嚴(yán)重,個人感覺是這樣。如果你實在沒反應(yīng)過來,答案,需要一些時間想,那你不要說um,,插入填充語就好,后面這個會用具體例子來講。
6.回答問題千萬不要不懂裝懂,沒聽清或者沒聽明白的一定要問考官,或者讓考官重復(fù)一遍,就像是你和一個人談話沒聽明白讓他重說一遍,這是語言溝通和交流的正常現(xiàn)象不會扣分。但是如果你不懂裝懂,那性質(zhì)就不一樣了。但是對方說第二遍的時候你千萬要仔細(xì)聽了,要是對問題還不是很清楚,你千萬不能跟第一次一樣讓對方重復(fù)一遍,這樣很容易讓考官覺得你要么理解能力不行要么英語聽力有問題,這時你可以問考官是不是你理解的意思,對方說是,你再開始回答,如果不是,對方會再重復(fù)一遍或者用更簡單的表達方式,你的目的就達到了,又得到了對方重復(fù)一遍的機會,又不會尷尬,在對方眼里你還是在思考的,就不會扣分。
7.口語考試結(jié)束之后主動感謝考官,起來之后順便把椅子往桌子那里推一下,動作輕一些,老外會看在眼里,相信我不會有錯,離開房間再次感謝考官,并說再見。這些都是小細(xì)節(jié),口語主要還是實力,但這些小細(xì)節(jié),真的會有印象分,其實口語評分考官的主觀性還是占了一部分因素的,盡管他們經(jīng)過專門的培訓(xùn),但他們也是人,是人就有主觀性,這一點不能否認(rèn)。
接下來我要分析的可能是口語中非常重要的部分了,就是答案應(yīng)該怎么組織,很多人背雅思哥APP上面的答案,覺得省事也省錢,我想說,你現(xiàn)在是省事了省錢了,但是你的口語也許真的萬年5.5了,那個答案我不是說它不好,而是它不是屬于你的故事,不是你的思想,也不是你的表達結(jié)構(gòu)和邏輯,你說出來不覺得別扭嗎?或者說你覺得你能夠駕馭得了這些故事嗎?你就不怕跟別人撞了被考官發(fā)現(xiàn)背答案嗎?還是那個建議吧,別想著在口語上敷衍,你敷衍它,分?jǐn)?shù)絕對會敷衍你,在這方面如果你寫作很好,你可以自己寫part2,寫完修改,形成自己的答題思路和邏輯,先說什么,說多少,再說什么,說多少,哪些地方要著重說,哪些地方要展開分析,用那些句型,有哪些好的且地道的詞或詞組,這些是你自己要去思考的,別人幫不了你。如果你備考時間只有兩個月甚至更短,那你只能在淘寶買話題,我見到有人二十幾塊錢買了全套的話題答案,這個我不想評價,但我還是建議你們盡量去找歐美外教定制,具體原因不細(xì)講了。我是自己買的歐美外教定制答案,這個答案也會有小部分的錯誤,但是相對其他的來說質(zhì)量還是要好很多的,主要是故事是自己的,獨一無二不用怕跟別人撞,我當(dāng)時是把這些答案按照自己的答題思路和邏輯重新組織了一遍,句子和用詞能不改動盡量不改動,形成了完全屬于自己的答案,然后就是用上一篇文章說的那種方法進行復(fù)習(xí)。
二、下面我講一下part1,part2,part3應(yīng)該怎樣回答,我會用例子來呈現(xiàn)錯誤的的答案和正確的答案,這樣大家對比著看會更直觀一些。
1.part1
應(yīng)注意的問題:
(1)回答要用完整句子,不要用名詞或短語
例:what's your name ?
錯誤回答:Andrew ? ? ?
正確回答:My name's Andrew Gray(準(zhǔn)考證上怎么寫的就怎么念,比如你叫張?zhí)烀鳎灰fMy name's Tianming Zhang,直接說My name's? Zhang Tianming,回答到這里就結(jié)束了了,不要接著說my english name is ...,考官沒問你你說了,可能他會覺得你有提前背答案,不要畫蛇添足,如果考官需要知道,他會問你,到時候再回答)
(2)回答是千萬不要跑題
例:describe your hometown?
錯誤回答:i come from Beijing,as you may know,Beijing is the capital of China.i am really proud of it and miss it badly when i am not there .In my hometown ,there are so many? parks where i like to visit regularly for the purpose of relaxing myself.(有細(xì)節(jié),但答非所問,嚴(yán)重跑題,題目讓你描述家鄉(xiāng),而答案是對家鄉(xiāng)的感覺以及在家鄉(xiāng)喜歡做的事情,描述家鄉(xiāng)是要求回答客觀存在的現(xiàn)實,而不是主觀的情感和你喜歡做什么)
正確回答:i come from Beijing,as you may know,Beijing is the capital of China.it is a big city,so it is very busy and crowed .it is ?the kind of places where people always seem to be in a hurry.The center has a lot of shopping malls and historical tourist attractions ,while out of the center there are mostly residential areas.(這樣才是在客觀的描述事實,思路很清晰,沒有個人情感,完全是客觀陳述)
(3)回答應(yīng)該較為詳盡,要有細(xì)節(jié)
例:describe your hometown?
錯誤回答:i come from Beijing,Beijing is the capital of China.(答案太簡單沒細(xì)節(jié),回答了之后,北京市怎樣的對方還是不清楚)
正確回答:i come from Beijing,as you may know,Beijing is the capital of China.it is a big city,so it is very busy and crowed .it is? the kind of places where people always seem to be in a hurry.The center has a lot of shopping malls and historical tourist attractions ,while out of the center there are mostly residential areas.(考場上這樣回答就可以了,內(nèi)容足夠又有細(xì)節(jié),就算沒有到過北京的人肯定也對北京有個大概的了解)
(4)回答要盡量具體一些,善用一些高級詞匯
例:describe your home?
錯誤回答:i live in an apartment .there is a bedroom ,a living room and a kitchen.(這樣回答,對方還是不知道具體情況,比如說這個apartment在哪兒,bedroom是什么樣,living room是怎么樣,kitchen是什么樣)
正確回答:i live in a medium-sized apartment in a tall building ,it has three rooms in total ,with a tiny bedroom ,an open-plan living room and a small kitchen.(這樣回答內(nèi)容更具體一些,用了比較多的形容詞,對方也能了解的更清楚一些)
(5)說著說著忘詞了不能直接說自己忘詞,要努力去用別的方式表達這個詞的意思
例:describe your home?
錯誤回答:i live in a medium-sized apartment in a tall building ,it has four rooms in total ,with a tiny bedroom ,an open-plan living room , a small kitchen..the fourth room is a ...um...i forgot the word in english.(出現(xiàn)忘詞之后就直接放棄了)
正確回答:i live in a medium-sized apartment in a tall building ,it has four rooms in total ,with a tiny bedroom ,an open-plan living room , a small kitchen..the fourth room is a ...what's the word? just like an office ,where i do some work and study sometimes.(也出現(xiàn)了忘詞,但對這個詞進行了解釋)
(6)盡量使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)稍微復(fù)雜一點的句子,不要全部都是簡單句
例:what do you like to do in your free time?
錯誤回答:i have many hobbies ,sometimes i play basketball or go jogging ,sometimes i read book or cook something ,cooking is relaxing .(句子都是簡單句,比較短,語法也是比較簡單的語法)
正確回答:i have a lot of hobbies,what i do depends on my mood .for example,if i am feeling energetic,i like to play basketball or go jogging.if i want to relax,i tend to read a book or cook somethig.cooking is relaxing.(表達清晰,長短句搭配,沒有語法錯誤)
2.part2
答題結(jié)構(gòu) :
開頭段:well,today i'm going to talk about...
主體段:(1)(2)(3)前三個問題每個問題的答案大概1-2個句子,(4)最后一個問題大概3-4個句子
結(jié)尾段:from what i told you just now ,i believe you already understand why ...
part2要注意的問題:
(1)認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備,每一個話題都不能放過,不能存僥幸心理
(2)組織好結(jié)構(gòu),開頭和結(jié)尾要清楚
(3)回答題中問題要加入細(xì)節(jié)(不要跑題或加入一些與題目無關(guān)的內(nèi)容)
(4)掌控好答題時間(最好是能控制在1分50秒到1分55秒之內(nèi))
(5)一定要注意時態(tài)
舉例說明part2答案如何寫:
例:describe an important choice you made
you should say : (1)what choice you had
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (2)what you decided
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (3)how difficult it was to make your decision
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?(4)explain how you feel about the choice now
(1)what choice you had
錯誤回答:i had to choose between ?studying computer science and industrial design.只是簡單的回答了問題沒有闡述細(xì)節(jié))
正確回答:i had to choose between studying computer science and industrial design.to be honest ,i was interested in both ,although i always felt that studying computer science was a better choice for me.(不僅回答了問題還說明了細(xì)節(jié),這樣才能表現(xiàn)出矛盾,也更能體現(xiàn)這個決定做起來不容易,所以是很重要的決定)
(2)what you decided
錯誤回答:i decided to study computer science(只是回答了問題,沒有細(xì)節(jié),沒有說明自己為什么選擇這個而不是音樂)
正確回答:after further comparison of them, i decided to study computer science,because to my way of thinking,it would give me some better career opportunities.(不僅回答了問題,還說明了是在進一步對比兩者之后做出了決定,故事更顯得完整而真實,此外給出了原因,用了一些詞組,使句子長短有致,說話節(jié)奏也更正常一些)
(3)how difficult it was to make your decision
錯誤回答:it was quite a difficult decision to make .(只是簡單的回答了問題,沒有說明這個決定難道什么程度,為什么做這個決定這么難)
正確回答:i had to admit it was quite a difficult decision to make,because my parents and teachers all gave me diffierent advices and i did not know what i should to do.(加入插入語,語句銜接更緊密,回答了問題也給出了原因)
(4)explain how you feel about the choice now
錯誤回答:i am glad that i choose to study computer science,i think i made a wise as well as right decision.(只是回答了問題,沒有說為什么自己為做這個決定感到高興,為什么覺得它是個明智的決定)
正確回答:now,thinking back,i am glad that i choose to study computer science,i think i made a wise as well as right decision.because i really enjoy working in IT,it is very creative and three's always something new to learn.(回答了問題,加入了原因)
3.part3
應(yīng)注意的問題:這個部分有點類似與大作文,這個部分的論點可以和寫作一起積累。
例:do you think that children do less sport and exercise than in the past.
(1)明確給出你的觀點,然后給出支撐你觀點的論點,即原因(你為什么同意或者不同意),想不到原因可以舉例子,原因和例子都有更好,任選其一也行。
答案:yes,i agree.(觀點)children have more homework and are under more pressure at school,so they have less time to play sports or do some outdoor activities.(原因)for example ,when i was young ,i played outside with my friends every day after school ,while nowadays,i nearly never see children play ouside. (例子)
(2)對于不太確定的事情可以進行推測
答案:children definitely do less sport and exercise nowadays,(觀點)but i am not sure why that is (不知道確切原因).maybe it's because they spend more time online,playing video games and so on.(推測可能的原因)
(3)說另一方面的觀點,全面討論,要辯證的看待問題,不是形而上學(xué)那樣對就是完全的對錯就是完全錯,有的時候?qū)﹀e不絕對,所以你可以說自己同意這個現(xiàn)狀,說完原因列子之后,再說這個現(xiàn)象也并不絕對。
答案:yes,i agree。children have more homework and are under more pressure at school,so they have less time to play sports or do some outdoor activities.for example ,when i was young ,i played outside with my friends every day after school ,while nowadays,i nearly never see children play outside. (主要觀點),however,it is not true that all children are less active than in the past.(給出反方向的觀點,這個部分可以略說)
(4)用填充語為自己爭取思考的時間
比如:that is really an interesting question等等
(5)對這個話題實在沒什么可說的也不太了解的時候,實話實說,但要給出你為什么不清楚這個問題的原因
答案:i really have no idea in terms of this question,(清楚表明這個話題自己不了解)as you may know,i do not have children now,so i am afraid it is just not a topic that i can say much about(給出不了解話題的原因)i suppose that children might be less active than in the past,because they spend more time on video games and something like that.(盡量給出一個猜測性的原因)
ps:用鍵盤敲出這些英文真的是件辛苦的事情,我會說這篇文章我是昨天開始準(zhǔn)備,今天用了整整五個小時一個字一個字敲出來的嗎?累覺不愛,寶寶先歇會兒去了。希望對大家有用哈,這樣我的辛苦也算值得了!