On Writing Well-Chapter 5&6

2017.11.1

Part 1 Words

1.debris n. 殘骸,碎片

原文:And since style is who you are ,you only need to be true to yourself to find it gradually emerging from under the accumulated clutter and debris,growing more distinctive every day.

解釋:the pieces that are left after something has been destroyed

造句:The debris from buildings can be seen everywhere after the earthquake.

2.garrulous 嘮叨的,喋喋不休的

原文: Other old writers ramble and repeat themselves; their style is the tip-off that they have turned into garrulous bores.

解釋:very talkative

造句:She is garrulous.

3. sloppy 馬虎的,草率的,邋遢的

原文:Sloppy editing is common in newspapers, often for lack of time, and the writers who use cliches often work for editors who have seen so many cliches that they no longer even recognize them.

解釋:not careful or neat?

造句: A sloppy woman will not tidy her room every day.


Part 2 Thoughts?

今天的閱讀信息量巨大,很多都看不明白,也發覺了自己的渺小。還是那句話,堅持下去,每天進步一點點。

Making a habit of reading what is being written today and what was written by earlier master . Writing is learned by imitation .

寫作的學習就是模仿的一個過程。那模仿誰呢?之前自己也覺得能出現在書上報紙上的應該都是不會錯的,值得背誦模仿的。但是今天看到這,覺得我們選擇我們模仿的素材,必須是非常謹慎的。在我們還沒有具備鑒別能力之前,還是應該多看看經典,錯不到哪里去。呵呵

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