題目：
假定你是李華。你班同學決定為小明舉辦生日聚會。
請你寫信邀請外教Susan參加，要點包括：
⒈ 時間：周五晚8點至9點
⒉ 地點：學生俱樂部
⒊ 內容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等
⒋ 要求：備小禮物
注意：
⒈ 詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；
⒉可以適當增加細節，以便行文連貫；
⒊ 答案必須寫在 答題卡 相應的位置上。
Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiao Ming’s birthday.
【例文】
Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiao Ming’s birthday. How are you doing? I’m Li Hua. The vice minister of your class. This Friday，a birthday party will be held for Xiao Ming. So，I，on behalf of my class，am going to invite you to come
? ?Here are several details about the activity. First and foremost, it will be held in the student club from 8:00 pm. to 9:00 pm. Additionally, not only will we sing a birthday song, but also we are able to share a birthday cake and play some interesting games，Which will be both meaningful and entertaining. Last but not least，each of us is supposed to give Xiao Ming a gift；As a result，you need to bring one.
We Would feel extremely honored and delighted，if you could make it to our activity，Please drop me a line or send me a text message to let me know your decision soon. I‘m looking forward to your reply and your presence.
Best wishes to you！
Yours,
Li Hua
Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiao Ming’s birthday.
How are you doing? I’m Li Hua. The vice minister of your class.
1 不要寫How are you，增加你的字數 讓閱卷老師覺得你的作文有規范有制度
2 Vice minister 副班長、副主席 要給出一個身份，介紹自己是誰，加上這個能讓閱卷老師知道你在班上有職位，字好看等等
This Friday，a birthday party will be held for Xiao Ming
提出時間 為了某人都用For，把主語放在了前面，后面的動詞用的被動，使你的逼格高，也可以寫成There will be a birthday party for Xiao Ming
So，I，on behalf of my class，am going to invite you to come
So，因此，So連接新的句子用逗號，On behalf of代表…，這個句子是一個插入語，例如第三者。第三者不會影響句子成分，不會影響成分，直接把她干掉。即I am going to invite you to come。【需慎重】
Here are several details about the activity.
介紹活動內容時，要寫一個承上啟下的過渡句，否則會顯得比較生疏。Several建議替換成A great majority of.即許多。
First and foremost, it will be held in the student club from 8:00 pm. to 9:00 pm.
主語用的是物，后面謂語動詞是被，剛剛提到了activity不能重復了，it指的就是那個活動。It will be hold將會被舉行.
Additionally, not only will we sing a birthday song, but also we are able to share a birthday cake and play some interesting games，Which will be both meaningful and entertaining.
1 兩個東西并且很長的句子不用寫and，Not only but also.前倒后不倒，情態動詞提前，后面就正常語序
2 Be able to=can 可以
3 Which will be both meaningful and entertaining.【高逼格】【必背】一個事情很非常棒，就可以加這個這件事情是多么的有意義和開心的
例子：You are supposed to read much more English books, which will be both meaningful and entertaining.
Last but not least，each of us is supposed to give Xiao Ming a gift；As a result，you need to bring one.
Each of us【這不是復數√】我們每一個人 是一個單數。
One指禮物，這里As a result是所以的意思=so
We Would feel extremely honored and delighted，if you could make it to our activity，Please drop me a line or send me a text message to let me know your decision soon.
1 你將會感到非常榮耀和高興的
2 if you could make it to our activity
可以替換成簡單的句子：If you could come to our activity.
3 Drop me a line 留個短信
4 let me know your decision soon讓我們盡快知道你的決定
I‘m looking forward to your reply and your presence.
Best wishes to you！
Yours,
Lihua
我期待你的回復
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